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Morning everyone

Thank you for all your comments on last upload, its all very much appreciated.

BEST LARGE IF YOU HAVE TIME

saeid

Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:pentacon 5.6 500mm manually
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Fly 2
Username:saeidNL saeidNL
Uploaded:15 Mar 2010 - 12:03 AM
Tags:General, Klick, Pentax, Saeid , Tamron, Wildlife / nature
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DanielD
DanielD  4 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 12:08 AM

A great aerodynamic shape for this goose. Great capture and very nice position of the wings for this bird, Congrats!

Dan

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morpheus1955
15 Mar 2010 - 12:10 AM

Good morning Saeid, what a super image, very well timed and captured.

Hugh

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colmar
colmar  742 forum posts Scotland35 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 12:12 AM

Morning Saeid , a cracking image so well captured in flight the detail is grand perhaps another as per the mod will show the flying into the space rather than in the centre but it is just an idea as opposed to critiscism of the image in and of itself Colin

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andylea
andylea  637 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 12:17 AM

a brailliant well timed capture nice one Wink
andy

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heids
heids  5 Scotland1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 12:17 AM

Fantastic image, well timed and taken.

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still2click
15 Mar 2010 - 12:40 AM

great image! well captured

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clicknimagine
15 Mar 2010 - 6:18 AM

saeidNL you have no doubt taken this shot very well, as well as i should say it is not an easy task to do, but as you have send it to the critique gallery i should try to give you some points which you can consider, i agree with Colin, that you could have cropped the left side blank space, placing the subject at the center is not generally the best thing,

i should also suggest you to correct the white balance because an yellowish cast is visible, the bird should be pure white,

many members can beat me, if i say, you could have cropped the blank space at the right side irrespective of the rules, so that the bird appears to be going out side the frame, and give a title like "The End of the Day",

wish you best of luck...

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DavidWebb
DavidWebb  7 England
15 Mar 2010 - 8:53 AM

Nice capture Saeid. David

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A Booth
A Booth e2 Member 12A Booth vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 8:54 AM

well timed and executed capture. as suggested a tighter crop might improve, a nice image all the same.

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Lillian
Lillian e2 Member 5Lillian vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 11:33 AM

A well got bird in flight and you have done the corrections well in your mod
Lillian

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johnjones
johnjones  5 England
15 Mar 2010 - 12:09 PM

great flight shot spot on a tighter crop and leave well alone
jj

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Petro_Conradie
15 Mar 2010 - 12:26 PM

Awesome capture
P

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Jekaro
Jekaro e2 Member 5Jekaro vcard United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 - 3:58 PM

A fabulous in-flight capture, Saeid.
Roy

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patspeirs
patspeirs  7 Scotland
15 Mar 2010 - 4:54 PM

Great in-flight action capture - perhaps crop a bit tighter to increase the size of the subject and trim the left side 'redundant' space - effective shot.
Pat

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digital_boi
15 Mar 2010 - 6:42 PM

yes a good crop either both sides or just the left would have helped here. But back to the shot not easy, to get this, as well as you have. Great timing and focus click

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norton
norton  10 United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 8:11 PM

Nicely timed capture Saied.................

Tony.

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jools59
jools59  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 8:23 PM

Nice shot...Jools

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Jestertheclown
15 Mar 2010 - 8:42 PM

A few problems with this as you'll see if you look at my mods.
They're the best I can do unfortunately.
I should have said; all work was carried out using CS2.
Jester.

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Roly
Roly  7 Wales
15 Mar 2010 - 9:44 PM

Super well timed capture.

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Ridgeway
Ridgeway  8222 forum posts Ireland2 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2010 - 9:46 PM

Lovely timed shot,
Gives a great sence of speed,
Very nice,

Aidan,,

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bromley-smith
15 Mar 2010 - 10:49 PM

Fabulous image Saeid.
Tony

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Jez22
Jez22  6 United Kingdom
15 Mar 2010 - 11:54 PM

Great Image,well caught

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gerrymac
gerrymac  7 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
16 Mar 2010 - 1:46 PM

Super timing...love it
Gerry

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Swamiji
Swamiji  4 India1 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2010 - 2:39 PM

Beautiful capture. You have even got its shadow.
I would suggest some change in the background colour and cropping both sides.
- Swamiji

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Mackdundee
18 Mar 2010 - 11:39 AM

Great image well taken
The only thing that I could say is next time try tracking the bird across the frame to blur the background and this will add movement

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darren41
darren41  4 United Kingdom
31 Mar 2010 - 10:45 PM

wow what an excelent in flight capture of this goose excelent photograpy skills thanks for shareing this awesome image
Darren41

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