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forget the front

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2980
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:7 Oct 2012 - 3:08 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/210sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Focused
Username:LucasHughesPhotography LucasHughesPhotography
Uploaded:9 Oct 2012 - 8:11 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants, Focus
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84292 forum posts England163 Constructive Critique Points
9 Oct 2012 - 8:33 PM

You've managed to focus on the background beautifully, but I think it needs a specific subject to actually rest our eyes on (a tree, person or perhaps animal). At the moment I'm wondering what I'm supposed to be looking at.

Perhaps a few words in the description box telling us your thoughts behind this image, if you are happy with it or if you think it needs improving - all these points can help us give you some hints and tips on how to improve. Smile

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drayl002
drayl002  434 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
9 Oct 2012 - 9:07 PM

Yea, what are we looking at? Great idea though it need a subject, as Karen said a animal, tree, flower or person. The colors are a little flat too; try editing the colors in a editing software.

Luke

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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139495 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
10 Oct 2012 - 12:55 AM

A different camera viewpoint would have helped here.

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