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I like the simplicity of this one but i fear the background merges with the foreground

Hope you like it

Andy

Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 70-300mm VR @ 70
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Footpath
Username:anpix anpix
Uploaded:14 Feb 2009 - 8:37 AM
Tags:B+w, Black & white, Footpath, Sign
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Merlin_k
Merlin_k e2 Member 5Merlin_k vcard Netherlands2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2009 - 9:14 AM

I think you got it Andy. There is excellent clarity to the sign, nice and sharp, and then the background blurs out. The only changes I would make would be around the upright of the sign. I think I would have used the upright as my right hand border rather than leave a small gap. At the top I think you either need to crop down slightly so the upright fills the side, or to have left a bigger gap, my gut feel is a bigger gap woould be better.

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anpix
anpix  688 forum posts United Kingdom
14 Feb 2009 - 11:44 AM

Thanks a lot very helpful

Andy

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Briwooly
Briwooly  8452 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2009 - 12:30 PM

Andrew done you a small mod blurred the background and a small trim let me know your thoughts Wink

Brian..........................................

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MrsS
MrsS  74527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2009 - 12:52 PM

I do like the simplicity, as you say, Andy - - of your two versions, I prefer #2, think Brian has done a fab mod for you Smile

Fran x

Last Modified By MrsS at 14 Feb 2009 - 12:52 PM

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sneal
sneal  7 United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2009 - 4:19 PM

Nice and simple Andy. I think the suggested crop and the mod are worthwhile changes though.
Steve

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anpix
anpix  688 forum posts United Kingdom
14 Feb 2009 - 9:41 PM


Quote: Andrew done you a small mod blurred the background and a small trim let me know your thoughts

Brian..........................................

Thanks I like your mod

very kind

Andy

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