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1/3 sec; f4; ISO 100; 24mm focal length
Cropped; converted to mono; brightness and contrast increased

Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:EF24-105 L series
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Forever
Username:Merlin_k Merlin_k
Uploaded:2 Jan 2010 - 7:04 PM
Tags:Architecture, Black & white
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RTR
RTR  5 United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jan 2010 - 7:20 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

No critique needed, this is an excellent abstact that works extremely well in mono. Perhapse just a touch of sharpening. If you had used a smaller apeture this would have solved the problem with a wider depth of field, say f10 upwards, which could have been done as you must have used a tripod at such a slow shutter speed. You should be proud of this image. Rich.

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edsephiroth
2 Jan 2010 - 7:46 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I really like this, very effective tones, an old and obvious idea but done extremely well. I also like the framing, but my only reserve would be the odd choice (if it was a choice) to have it slightly off-centre, that jangles a little and seems very out of place. Cropping a little tighter on the left-hand side of the picture would address that just a little?

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angelsj
angelsj  7 Scotland
3 Jan 2010 - 12:36 AM

fantatsic picture, great for leading your eyes stariaght into the picture, you just want to walk into it

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Eviscera  81097 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jan 2010 - 2:51 PM

Great exercise in perspective. As you went mono , perhaps pushing the graphical lines would have give this even more impact ! Did you a mod.

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clicknimagine

this is no doubt a beautiful shot, very well taken, but according to me this image needs some sharpness and contrast, i do not know what f number you have used but as said above f11 and above would be better, and you should set the focus to infinity (hyper focus), a tripod can give a better result obviously, if it is not possible at that time, try to do something different placing the camera on the ground(floor pov) take the shot, that will be powerful,

wish you best of luck for your future work...

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