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i'm trying to make expression photo ... still learning
I need your all comment, please welcome ......

Camera:Nikon D40X Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:freedom 2
Username:irone irone
Uploaded:10 Dec 2008 - 4:14 AM
Tags:Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Freedom, General
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DebbieBMP
DebbieBMP  533 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Dec 2008 - 6:43 AM

This is absolutely brilliant - well done- Debbie

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Eviscera
Eviscera  81096 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
10 Dec 2008 - 8:41 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

has an almost religious overtone to it. Processing and colours and pose are spot on. Perhaps the top right elbow is a little dominant but hardly.

great

Dave

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2781 Constructive Critique Points
10 Dec 2008 - 6:57 PM

Its not possible to critique this image photographically Irone, as its digital art, and have been heavily manipulated.

From an aesthitic perspective, its really gorgeous, very reminiscent of old masters/biblical images. Its strongly conveys a sense of despair, pain, loss, and connects with me, - and I assume with many people on a very deep level. Its composed very well also.

Your portfolio has many images of this type, all first class, telling the same story to me.

Eviscera is the master of this style I think, and you can do no better than to be inspired by his creative work.


Regards


Willie

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irone
irone  8
11 Dec 2008 - 2:16 AM

Thank's Willie .... lately i feel it too, i wanna show & share to all of you about my feeling right now. that true. about my style just translation from my mind. but Yes ... Eviscera is the master of it. i agree.

i have another art work.... just wait

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irone
irone  8
11 Dec 2008 - 2:16 AM

Thank's Willie .... lately i feel it too, i wanna show & share to all of you about my feeling right now. that true. about my style just translation from my mind. but Yes ... Eviscera is the master of it. i agree.

i have another art work.... just wait
regards

Irone

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edsephiroth
11 Dec 2008 - 1:29 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Love the colours and texture.
I'm a little distracted by trying to figure out the purpose or meaning of the title, plus aesthetically, my only criticism would be that weird little bit in the bottom left corner - I would have just made it a dark spot rather than have a different colour in it.

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CraigSampson
12 Dec 2008 - 2:55 PM

Wonderful stuff, has that muscular Michaelangelo look to it, those hands remind me of the David statue and has that old master tone.

Love it

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2781 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2008 - 4:06 PM

Congratulations on the Premier Award, - well deserved!


Willie

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Eviscera
Eviscera  81096 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2008 - 6:34 PM

well done Irone , knew this shouldve got the recognition it derserved !

Dave

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Ayelet_A
Ayelet_A  5 Israel3 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2008 - 6:39 PM

I can feel the pain coming from the image - superb.

Ayelet

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irone
irone  8
13 Dec 2008 - 4:02 AM

thank you for all your comment & great advice. that a lot of meaning to me to make it better.
regards,


irone

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alansdottir
13 Dec 2008 - 11:56 AM

Freedom is a state of mind... is any of us ever truly free?

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chrisco
chrisco  859 forum posts United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2008 - 11:57 AM

I love the gritty feel you have created here,really nice Smile.I echo one of the previous comments about the bottom left corner,a little distracting.One personal note for me,the hands look rather large?,and the wrist strap on the left wrist doesnt need to be there.Lost of potential though,good work.

Last Modified By chrisco at 13 Dec 2008 - 11:58 AM

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webjam
webjam  9292 forum posts Netherlands11 Constructive Critique Points
19 Dec 2008 - 10:01 PM

Like the way the image is half real and half unreal. The colouring, light and especially the texture make it stand out!
This picture tells so many stories! Very impressive!

Jacqueline

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shaw2708
shaw2708  5 England
22 Dec 2008 - 9:55 PM

true work of art. an artistist may paint his mind freely and create an amazing piece, but manipilating computers to do what image your mind holds is 2 arts combined to create as you have an amazing piece of work. keep it up that inspiring x
kathryn x

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sigimage
sigimage  6 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2009 - 8:50 AM

Good work, one of your less disturbing but equally fascinating pieces
of art.
Alan

Last Modified By sigimage at 7 Jan 2009 - 8:51 AM

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Robyn2012
Robyn2012  5 Australia
20 Jan 2009 - 1:54 AM

have you heard of an artist named Odd Nurdrum, if not tou may like to look him up on the web, this work has some of his qualities( he is a modern painter who likes the work of the renaisance painters but takes it to a different level. l really like the photo and find it very emotive.the tonal values of the browns -great

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