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This is a little further upstream from my previous upload. It is on the moor about halfway between Padley Gorge and the next bit of woodland.

1/40 sec
f16
-1 exp. comp.
iso 100
18mm

Comments and critique welcome.

Thanks.

Camera:KM Dynax 5D
Lens:KM 18-70 DT
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Further Upper Padley
Username:RipleyExile RipleyExile
Uploaded:14 Sep 2007 - 10:32 PM
Tags:Derbyshire, General, Landscape / travel, Moor, Padley, Padley gorge, Peak district, River, Upper padley
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derekv
derekv  7 England
14 Sep 2007 - 10:41 PM

Beautiful shot, great water movement.
Derek

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scouseterrier
14 Sep 2007 - 10:47 PM

great colours. Good composition.

Dee Smile

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graeme34
graeme34  7 United Kingdom
14 Sep 2007 - 10:51 PM

Great image

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C_Daniels
C_Daniels  9399 forum posts England10 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2007 - 11:01 PM

Think you need a polariser on the water...?

A nice reminder of our day though Smile

Last Modified By Dave at 14 Sep 2007 - 11:02 PM

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Hop-A-Long
15 Sep 2007 - 9:46 AM

Great composition. Love the colour.
Andy

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MalcolmS e2 Member 91072 forum postsMalcolmS vcard England13 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2007 - 6:17 PM

Great tranquil scene Alex

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iajacks  8
20 Sep 2007 - 12:45 PM

like the intence detail in the forground water.

well done ian

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digicammad  1121988 forum posts United Kingdom37 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2007 - 12:42 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a reasonable Summery shot with decent colours but for me it is missing that extra something which would make it really stand out.

I can see why you wanted to include the cloud but I actually think it is stronger with just a small amount of sky. That would put the little cascade up above the centre, where it would have more impact.

The cascade itself doesn't have a lot going on and is getting a little lost in the distance. I would be tempted to ignore those particular foreground rocks and move onto the next two, bringing the cascade closer. If you couldn't get that close you could try zooming in on it in landscape mode, then cropping into square format.

Another thing to try is a much longer exposure (if you have ND and/or polarising filters, which would make the water show up more.

Finally, with regard to presentation. I find landscapes tend to work better against black (or sometimes white) backgrounds rather than the mid tones.

HTH

Ian

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