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digital painting[sunset] composition,focus and about painting is ok?
pls response.
shahidullah

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon PowerShot SX40 HS
Lens:4.3 - 150.5 mm (35 mm equivalent: 26.8 - 938.1 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Mar 2012 - 5:18 AM
Focal Length:5.2mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:-4/3
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:general
Username:shydallah shydallah
Uploaded:12 Apr 2012 - 12:16 PM
Tags:General
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2012 - 3:43 PM

Its doesnt really represent a painted effect, if thats what you were after,. can you let us know what method you used to do this and what software you have so perhaps we can make some suggestions?

As it is, for me it doesnt work well,



regards



Willie

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Jonny5874
Jonny5874  5 United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
12 Apr 2012 - 5:39 PM

The others are right, it doesn't work but from what I can see is that the colours are way too harsh and solid and you've either compressed it way too hard or you've applied some sort of filter to it. I've uploaded a modification, have a look and see what you think. Keep trying and have a look at tutorials on 'youtube' or 'phototuts' for help in trying to achieve better results.

Jon

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shydallah
shydallah  4 Bangladesh
12 Apr 2012 - 8:07 PM

ni just used rgb over and over by the camera only.co used pc.
Canon aded some genuine filter inside the sx40hs camera.which
can use after shot.i wanted to make painting like all the rubbish
which was besides the road.ie think colour not bleedig.finally
i add vivid colour more that may effect solarize.i am not sure about that.
Thanks all of you for your nice thought.
Best regard's
shahidullah

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1598 Constructive Critique Points
13 Apr 2012 - 6:45 PM

Thankyou for your response, Shahidullah.
This doesn't appeal to me, but you do like experimenting with colour, and there's nothing wrong with that.
If I understand you correctly, you were trying to make the image look like a painting, but I don't think that enhancing the colours gives the painted effect that you were looking for.
You also mention all the rubbish beside the road, but I am finding that difficult to see because of the strong colour in that area.
With a picture that has been heavily edited like this, it would be a good idea to let us see your original. You can upload it as a modification and tell us in your description that you have done that.
Pamela.

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shydallah
shydallah  4 Bangladesh
14 Apr 2012 - 10:44 AM

hi,pamela,today i uploded that original sunset photo for modification.sorry,which one i uploaded before that was delited same time after i aded coulor.this one is same image,this is full resulation and that one i corped because of too much rubbis besides the road.changing more coulor from first image is possible by camera if neededwill look like natural.
best regards
shahidullah.

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