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doves and kids:action like shoot.any thing needed to change,pls,coments.
by-shahidullah

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon PowerShot SX230 HS
Lens:5.0 - 70.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 27.9 - 390.9 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Jun 2012 - 12:50 AM
Focal Length:9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:general
Username:shydallah shydallah
Uploaded:5 Jun 2012 - 11:10 AM
Tags:General
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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jun 2012 - 6:45 PM

it's underexposed. but it is nice to see you not using full aperture. Smile

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Jestertheclown
5 Jun 2012 - 10:02 PM

Hi Mohammad,
The flatness here is caused by underexposure, so I've opened it in CS6 and simply made an adjustment using curves.
I used the eyedroppers, although an 'S' curve would probably have worked just as well.
And that's all that I've done!
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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shydallah
shydallah  4 Bangladesh
6 Jun 2012 - 11:29 AM

hi,arhab and bren,thanks for your coments.yes,this was underexposed.moment shoot.no enough time for adjasting expossure.i think under expose is better then over expose.under expose picture can print with perfect exposure.over expossure no.
best regards-
shahidullah

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pamelajean Critique Team 8754 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1587 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jun 2012 - 10:31 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

There is a lot to like about this picture, Mohammad, in particular the action of the birds and children that you have captured, the birds flying, and the position of the bench and people in the top left. But I don't think you need so much of the building at the top, and the red and pink squares at the top are very distracting, so I'd suggest a crop.
I agree with others about the underexposure, and also feel there is some colour to be brought out.
I like the fact that you have filled half the frame with the birds, and that your shutter speed was sufficient to freeze the action of the running child and flying birds. The action communicates a message to me, and this is the type of thing that children probably do worldwide, at least they do here in England, scattering the birds by running into them. I don't think you could have improved upon your point of view or composition.
It's good to see you using exposure compensation because I imagine the light is quite bright where you live. Maybe just a bit too much for this scene, though.
I have done a modification where I cropped the top and sides, then used Levels to brighten the image and improve the contrast, and also added some saturation to bring out the colours.
Pamela.

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