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again this same picture.same day and same time i shoot this picture.
pls,coment.
shahidullah

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon PowerShot SX230 HS
Lens:5.0 - 70.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 27.9 - 390.9 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Jun 2012 - 12:45 AM
Focal Length:5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/3.1
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:160
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:general
Username:shydallah shydallah
Uploaded:12 Jun 2012 - 11:13 AM
Tags:General
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2795 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jun 2012 - 1:17 PM

This is a much better crop, its nice to see the complete fountain. Were you going into the Canon store?


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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jun 2012 - 2:52 PM

For me I felt that you needed all of the pool in the frame, so its inclusion is a big improvement. The spray is OK dependent upon how you wanted to portray it, Milky water is not for everybody.

EXIF Again. I do not know why you have used f3.1 here with an exposure conmpensation of -1/3. If this is your compact which only operates on full aperture, then at least zero the compensation and then take a few test shots until you are happy. This looks like a job for a tripod with your ISO raised up to around 800.

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 12 Jun 2012 - 2:53 PM

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jun 2012 - 9:05 PM

this is better than before shydallah. but somehow my eyes attrack to canon store,... this is where you buy the cam?

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pablophotographer

Applauds.

Excellent shot shydallah, I see you've followed my advice.

I bet this as a picture must have made you happier and indeed it should.

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