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macro shoot,flower and butterfly.
pls,coment if something is not correct.
shahidullah

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon PowerShot SX230 HS
Lens:5.0 - 70.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 59.2 - 828.3 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Jun 2012 - 8:52 PM
Focal Length:5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:general
Username:shydallah shydallah
Uploaded:26 Jun 2012 - 10:59 AM
Tags:General
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aeras  2 Cyprus6 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 7:12 PM

mohammad Hi ,

First I find the angle of the butterfly strange , almost like the frame is wrongly rotated, also the large green leaf on the left , another on top and flowers at right , compete for attention with the butterfly , so one has for a moment to look and find where is that butterfly.

A much tighter crop could remove some of the distractions and make the viewer concentrate more easily on you main subject.
Other than that , your aperture and speed was good enough for capturing in detail your subject.

Take care

Charles

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SueEley  8271 forum posts Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 7:15 PM

Nice picture of the insect, and it looks pretty sharp, though not bitingly sharp. Better to avoid backgrounds with a lot going on if possible, and might look better flipped to face the other way.

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