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I do very few images of people and when I do I am less than confident on what I want and what works and what doesn't, so would welcome some critique on this one. Some detail. The image was informal, there was no lighting used of any kind. The aim was to take an image that looked natural and relaxed.

The final piece of info is the young model is my daughter and she hates getting her photo taken!!

Title:girl
Username:comma comma
Uploaded:16 Jun 2008 - 9:11 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139675 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jun 2008 - 1:01 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Delightful looking child. You have got most of the elements right here. However your daughter needs to be separated more from the background. The skin tone looks a bit on the 'cool' side.

I've uploaded a mod, which attempts to address these issues, for you to consider.

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comma
comma  6101 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jun 2008 - 10:06 PM

Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it greatly. I agree the mod does give the image more depth and improves the skin tones considerably.

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