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Gothic girl in a cemetary pose.

Camera:Cannon 400D
Lens:Sigma 18-200
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Grave Girl
Username:b8wsa b8wsa
Uploaded:25 Jul 2008 - 12:25 PM
Tags:Black, Black & white, Cemetary, Girl, Goth, Grave, Graveyard, Portrait, Portraits / people
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colin
colin  9697 forum posts Scotland5 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2008 - 12:58 PM

I like the selective colouring.

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culturedcanvas
25 Jul 2008 - 2:03 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Recognise the model but this shot doesnt do her any favours. The natural framing actually is a good idea and does fit well but her dark hair blends into the background too much. I am liking the splash of colour on the wrist ... it does take your eye to it but it could have been used better to bring about the direction of the eye. I'd have positioned the model in a different location to be honest as the light isn't right here ... technically its not that bad for where youve shot her but maybe a 1/3 stop under exposed ... (you could argue that as a goth style shot theres nothing wrong with this though). It just doesn't have enough impact to or mood to work as it is.

That crit probably sounds a bit harsh but hopefully there's a few useful comments in there ....

Think I got an email from you the other day on one of the model sites by the way about locations to shoot??

Dan

Last Modified By culturedcanvas at 25 Jul 2008 - 2:04 PM

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b8wsa
b8wsa  6 United Kingdom
25 Jul 2008 - 2:37 PM

Thanks for the input, yes I asked about derelict locations in the NorthEast, any info would be great

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Ricky37
Ricky37  6
25 Jul 2008 - 5:03 PM

Good shot , shame the tats looks so bad ..

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