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Second one of the girl from the Chemist.

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:17-85
Title:Hannah2
Username:BillS BillS
Uploaded:20 May 2006 - 7:52 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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miptog
miptog e2 Member 93532 forum postsmiptog vcard United Kingdom61 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2006 - 7:54 AM

Like this natural look. Mike

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c_evans99
c_evans99 e2 Member 117013 forum postsc_evans99 vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2006 - 8:09 AM

Everything works well bar the black backdrop IMHO; it seems too heavy for the subject.

Ceri

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jgphoto
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20 May 2006 - 10:44 AM

It's very 'passport photo' I feel. You should get the girl to push her shoulders back and boobs out for a less slouched position. Also get her to move her whole body away from the camera then twist back slightly from the waist, again it improves posture.

John

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thorn
thorn e2 Member 10124 forum poststhorn vcard Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2006 - 12:56 AM

Hi Bill,she has lovely eyes,expression and detail.Superb composition.Take care.AnnSmile
thankyou for your kind commments,much appreciated.

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BillS
BillS e2 Member 827 forum postsBillS vcard United Kingdom
21 May 2006 - 7:13 AM

Thanks to Ianmac ,JPphoto and Joe Conway for the modifications . I enjoy seeing them , they give me ideas and show what can be done. Re.. Pose and background , I agree with the comment but the girl was working and only delivered a prescription , I was lucky to get a shot at all. She has agreed to come again but it will be in her lunch break ,so I'll see what I can do.

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