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Taken during there first dance

Camera:Nikon D70 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 18-200VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:happiness
Username:dandoextreme dandoextreme
Uploaded:2 Sep 2009 - 5:18 PM
Tags:Black & white, Fashion, Portraits / people, Wedding / social
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9710 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2671 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2009 - 8:57 PM

Its a really nice shot, - great timing, and I especially like the diagonla made by the brides arm.

It might benefit with being lust a little brighter as in the mod, - and a little sharper. You often need to sharpen after you re size for uploading, so Im sure your original shot is sharper.

I would try cropping a little off the left also, - to me it looks more intimate.

Hope this is useful,


Regards



Willie

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61581 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom572 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2009 - 10:11 PM

a great composition, lovely tight crop and excellent use of the diagonal line. the expressions are nice and the mono conversion is very nice and a good use of the filters to give pleasant skin tones.

may be the crops a little too tight around the top of the mans head and the whole thing could be a little sharper but that may be the upload and low res .

quite a nice shot and i expect a fav in the album
Phil

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cassiecat
cassiecat  539 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
3 Sep 2009 - 7:21 PM

like the intimacy of the tight crop, think willies brighter mod works really well.lesley

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Lucian
Lucian  4505 forum posts
1 Apr 2010 - 10:49 PM

very intimate. i like it.

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