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Trawler tied up in the harbour awaiting next assignment.
Could maybe do with something on the left hand side, tho i like it the way it is. Trying to give the impression of what the trawler looks like prior to setting sail for the next trip. Also the start of the journey
| Brand: | FUJIFILM |
| Camera: | Fujifilm FinePix S2970 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 23 Sep 2012 - 3:19 PM |
| Focal Length: | 5mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/3.1 |
| Aperture: | f/6.4 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/320sec |
| Exposure Comp: | 0.0 |
| ISO: | 64 |
| Exposure Mode: | Landscape |
| Metering Mode: | Multi-segment |
| Flash: | Off, Did not fire |
| White Balance: | Auto |
| Title: | Harbourside |
| Username: | |
| Uploaded: | 7 Oct 2012 - 8:34 PM |
| Tags: | Landscape / travel, Transport |
| VS Mode Rating |
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Comments
Good potential here for an interesting shot. Its too bad the boat is so far right, as including the bend in the river makes the shot interesting. What it really needs on the left is less. Crop space from the left to position the boat further in. The white balance is also a touch cool, - the whites of the clouds are tending towards blue.
Ive uploaded a cropped mod, - also added some more height, adjusted white balance, and toned down overblown highlights in the boat as much as possible.
Regards
Willie

Reasonable, but the composition is wrong. The boat needs to be on the left of the frame and there is very little but receeding river on the left. You say youlike that, and that is actually all that matters, but I think you will find most will want a more conventional composition because it simply looks better.
Paul

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