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I know in this photo there's not so much technique but I'd like having some feedbacks!

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Jun 2012 - 4:18 PM
Focal Length:24mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/2000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Heart by trails
Username:JacopoR JacopoR
Uploaded:17 Apr 2013 - 1:04 PM
Tags:Air, Blue, Clean, General, Heart, Italy, Plane, Show, Sky, Summer, Trails
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Mike43
Mike43 e2 Member 3Mike43 vcard England12 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2013 - 1:07 PM

Nicely seen and photographed.
Mike.

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 103956 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2013 - 1:43 PM

think a rotation would make this perfect Smile

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 74167 forum postsKarenFB vcard England160 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2013 - 2:46 PM

Hi Jacopo, welcome to EPZ! Smile

A fascinating image, beautifully caught.

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 31125 forum posts United Kingdom192 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2013 - 3:14 PM

Nice idea, and the exposure is pretty good. There isn't much there to critique really, though I would have liked to have seen more of the trails, as it's only an impression of a heart rather than a complete one. It looks a bit like you've added a blue grad effect at the bottom to hide something (heads, perhaps?) which has hidden the bottom of the heart as well.
It also looks like it's a few minutes old and is starting to dissipate - a fresh one would hold the shape better.

Nick

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JacopoR
JacopoR  1 Italy1 Constructive Critique Points
17 Apr 2013 - 4:12 PM


Quote: Nice idea, and the exposure is pretty good. There isn't much there to critique really, though I would have liked to have seen more of the trails, as it's only an impression of a heart rather than a complete one. It looks a bit like you've added a blue grad effect at the bottom to hide something (heads, perhaps?) which has hidden the bottom of the heart as well.
It also looks like it's a few minutes old and is starting to dissipate - a fresh one would hold the shape better.

Nick

Yes, I've hidden some heads and buildings at the bottom but the shape just finished there...thanks for your comment Smile

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