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Tungsten lighting. Main camera left, fill to right.

50mm lens, f2.8.

Brand:nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50mm f/1.4 D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:16 Nov 2011 - 8:17 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Heather02
Username:DouglasMorley DouglasMorley
Uploaded:19 Nov 2011 - 6:07 PM
Tags:Glamour female model, Portraits / people, Studio, Tungsten
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Oleg_Lobzin
19 Nov 2011 - 8:30 PM

Nice shot. Amazing lighting. The model is delicious.
Regards, Oleg.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom860 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2011 - 7:52 PM

Nice in general. Your tungsten lighting must be quite weak to need f2.8 and ISO1600. Two things - I would crop from the bottom - don't think 3/4 is ideal here as the image is in the top half and her hand, being near the light and very large is quite dominant.

Paul

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Lynamick
Lynamick  12 United Kingdom31 Constructive Critique Points
22 Nov 2011 - 1:45 PM

I tend to agree with Paul, also I would have ask the model to straightened her dress a little. The pose is not bad but I find the long straight line of the back of her neck a bit strange. The only other thing, ISO 1600, surely the photo should be showing a lot more grain?

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DouglasMorley
23 Nov 2011 - 6:25 PM

Thanks for the comments and suggestions.

Lynamick - thanks indeed for the lack of grain remark. Testament to the so called aging sensor and indeed, the camera.

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