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This was my first attempt at studio work, during my A level Photography course. The model was the tutors daughter & we had to take turns with the other students. I dont think it has ever happened since, but the moment I pressed the shutter I had the feeling that I had captured the moment (well at least for that night)! If was printed on an unknown "art paper" to a 10x8 print & the print scanned in. Unfortunately the scan seems to have blown the highlights & I am a bit of a Photoshop novice! Any comments on how I can improve would be most welcome.

Camera:Contax 159 MM
Lens:Tamron 135 f2.8 Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:Ilford FP4
Title:Helen
Username:BruceHB BruceHB
Uploaded:1 Apr 2006 - 10:33 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Hanners
Hanners e2 Member 8875 forum postsHanners vcard Ireland10 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2006 - 10:36 AM

I think you've got superb "connection" with the model, the eye contact is spot-on, although it seems a bit bright in the highlight areas. Composition is very good as is the pose. CLICK

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oppo
oppo  8 Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2006 - 10:58 AM

This is a top notch portrait. I think the scan has worked a treat. Nice to see some grain..Thats the good thing about FP4...Phil

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Nigel_95
Nigel_95 e2 Member 8260 forum postsNigel_95 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2006 - 11:01 AM

Welcome to epz. This is an excellent, natural portrait. Well done.

Nigel

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motman
motman  8
1 Apr 2006 - 1:47 PM

Ditto well done
jim

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