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My little girl was feeling cheeky and got hold of my phone. As I am just starting to get into portraits, all comments gratefully received

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:Sigma 17-70 DC OS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Hello anybody there?
Username:chrisheathcote chrisheathcote
Uploaded:12 Nov 2010 - 9:36 PM
Tags:People, Portrait, Portraits / people
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Lou_Pink
Lou_Pink  5 Northern Ireland6 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2010 - 10:12 PM

She is as cute as the proverbial button, I espcially love the strong loving eye ontact she has with you, you have a very beautiful little girl

Lou

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10900 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2892 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2010 - 11:22 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its a very nice shot Chris.

Youll need to let us know all your shot settings so we can be more helpful, - was flash used, what mode was the camera set to, whats the speed, aperture, ISO, - all the good stuff you find in the EXIF data.

So, driving blind (!) I think the shots appears overly yellow, - likely a white balance setting issue. it will look better with space cropped off the top to place her lovely eyes higher, about 1/3 the way down the frame.

What is great is the sharpness, great eyes, detailed and lovely catch lights, and the shot itself could be titles An Apple a Day, the Apple of my I, - it goes on...


I have loaded a mod to demonstrate my comments.


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Regards



Willie

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f8  119169 forum posts England22 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2010 - 7:06 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hello Chris,I have made a mod of your charming daughter,what eyes!!
I reduced the flash intensity effect and taken out some of the shadows,reduced the red effect with a blue filter,and put a frame around.
Hope you approve.

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chrisheathcote
chrisheathcote e2 Member 8241 forum postschrisheathcote vcard United Kingdom
13 Nov 2010 - 7:19 AM

Willie EXIF data is
ISO 400
AV Mode
F4.6 1/40 sec -1/3 stop EV comp
built in flash fired for fill in (didnt have my gun with me)

You were right about the WB setting I have corrected in LR and looks a lot better. Thanks for your comments, although I have had my camera a while, I have only just started to get seriously use my camera.

F8 your abilities with photoshop are a lot better than mine, how did you replace the background

Chris

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom858 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2010 - 9:11 AM

I rather like what you have presented - a super family shot. Being a bit on the warm side is an advantage I think - don't always have to be spot on. All i would do is crop a bit tighter to the head on all four sides and really concentrate on her face and smashing expression.

(In other words, no need to replace the background, just crop it out.)
Paul

Last Modified By paulbroad at 13 Nov 2010 - 9:11 AM

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10900 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2892 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2010 - 2:40 PM

Chris, - f8 didnt replace the background from what I see, - he applied a blur to it. You can do this by using layers and a mask, where you apply the blur to the whole shot, then using the mask, paint it in with black where you want no blur. Look up layer masks in the techniques section on the site, or juts Google for lots of tutorials. Its easy when you get the hang of it.



Willie

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NickParry
NickParry  91016 forum posts Wales79 Constructive Critique Points
14 Nov 2010 - 3:03 PM

Hi Chris,

Set the white balance to incandescent light.

Also if you push the ISO higher, say 800 ISO you would be able to increase the shutter speed above 125th of a second, which is more suitable. F4 or f5.6 would suit this shot. Don't worry too much about replacing the background as this type of shot should be natural and the background is fine (the f-stop used will blur the background anyway).

If it can be done in camera, rather than in post-processing, it makes your life easier, and is better for improving technique.

Nick Smile

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom858 Constructive Critique Points
14 Nov 2010 - 10:05 PM

Really, this is a super family shot. I would simply leave it alone and be pleased with what you have done.

Paul

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