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Sunrise between Oberstaufenbach and NeunKirchen

Camera:Panasonic DMC-G1
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Home on the Hill
Username:mlseawell mlseawell
Uploaded:15 Jul 2010 - 7:13 AM
Tags:Architecture, Landscape / travel, Landscape low light nature, Wildlife / nature
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W1ldside
W1ldside  4 United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2010 - 7:21 AM

Immense Interest and adequate lighting makes for a terrific Vista...
Rick

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davey_griffo
15 Jul 2010 - 7:30 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A very nice shot, & the colours in the sky are lovely.

Looking at the horizon, it is level. However, I suspect it actually went up hill right to left, as the building is leaning left. I'd use the sides of the building as your guide to straighten the shot. See my mod.

Edit.
When I actually tried it, it wasn't that simple. Rotating the frame made the wind turbines lean. What I ended up doing was going into free transform mode, grabbing the 2 top corner handles, & moving them out until it looked straight. I used a grid (ctrl-') as a guide.

Last Modified By davey_griffo at 15 Jul 2010 - 7:37 AM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2010 - 7:34 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Not sure if the building is leaning, or you were, but I would have straightened it. A decent image, but the strongest part is the brighter area with turbines, and that is right on an edge - better part way into the frame.

Paul

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mlseawell
mlseawell e2 Member 4mlseawell vcard United Kingdom
15 Jul 2010 - 7:40 AM

The mod from Davey_griffo is on the right track I believe. More mods welcome!

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Sooty_1 Critique Team 41267 forum postsSooty_1 vcard United Kingdom203 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2010 - 8:57 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I think it would have been better if you could have separated the building from the tree. I also think that in this instance, the wind turbines add nothing to the picture. They are too small and marginalised to really impact the scene.

Nick

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