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early morning these bees looks so beautiful on these beautiful tree with unknown name of flowers Smile

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D5000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:55-200mm f/4-5.6 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:31 Jul 2011 - 8:37 AM
Focal Length:185mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/1250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:honey bee
Username:saifzahid saifzahid
Uploaded:1 Aug 2011 - 1:36 PM
Tags:Bee flower, Flowers & plants
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rambler
rambler e2 Member 6469 forum postsrambler vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2011 - 4:37 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Saif,

the right hand side of this image has nothing in it and draws they eye away form the main subject.
I have uploaded a modification where I have cropped the image to get the bee on the magic third. I also applied a bit of unsharp mask on Photoshop 7.

Hope you like the mod.

Ken.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10826 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2830 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2011 - 5:43 PM

A very good shot, and an excellent mod and critique by Ken. Ive loaded almost the same mod. It does need to be sharpened a little more, and this is something you need to check after you re size you shot and save the file. open it again, check, and sharpen more if needed.



regards


Willie

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saifzahid
saifzahid  4
3 Aug 2011 - 10:05 PM

Thanks Ken Thanks Willie , you both have done excellent changes in this image,I like both mods and 100% agree with cropping option.
thank you both for your constructive critique.



Saif

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