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Taken whilst on a photographic recce with the Bolemeister (Bolebrown). This a stretch of the Kennett and Avon canal at Honey Street. Needless to say the photo expedition was not very successful.

Thanks for looking.

Matt

Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:18-250
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Honey Street
Username:Herge88 Herge88
Uploaded:29 Apr 2008 - 11:29 PM
Tags:Boat, Canal, General, Honey, Landscape / travel, Narrow, Street, Transport, Water
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strawman
strawman (e2 Member)
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29 Apr 2008 - 11:39 PM
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A pleasing image, my thoughts to alter it.

It would be nice to have a bit more sky over the house, it looks a bit trapped. Also you could clone out the bits of tree/bush just creeping into the cloud at the right. My last temptation would be to select the water and see if I could make it a bit less murky by playing with the Hue & saturation or levels.

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Badgerfred
Badgerfred (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 12:02 AM
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Lovely scene Matt, nice reflections,
Fred.

samsalt1
30 Apr 2008 - 12:24 AM
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I do agree about the house looking crammed in and the tree to the right but otherwise it's a lovely little pic. The recce wasn't a total waste of time as this little place has lots of potential,

Sam

User_Removed
30 Apr 2008 - 12:25 AM
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Nicely done .. lovely image

dave

DolphinLady
30 Apr 2008 - 12:33 AM
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Some wonderful bright colours to this lovely peaceful scene.
Fantastic reflections.
Hilary

newy17
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273 forum posts United Kingdom
30 Apr 2008 - 12:38 AM
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Beautifully captured and presented Matt..
ian

the reflections of the the house are superb !!!

Thank you for you kind words..

Nikki !

Leary
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New Zealand1 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2008 - 1:39 AM
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nice shooting. i too agree with strawmans suggestions but you should be happy with this.

Leary

TyChee
TyChee (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 2:58 AM
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A post card quality image.
Ty

AlanBW
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England
30 Apr 2008 - 7:01 AM
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Good suggestions above, but I like the reflections and perpsective

Nice shapes in the reflections of the brickwork here Matt.
Smile Lucy

lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 7:51 AM
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Excellently composed

bolebrown
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30 Apr 2008 - 8:46 AM
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You have cooked your goose with this shot Mr Brown Senior. It wasn't a sucessful trip was it. It would have been better for me if had remembered my camera.
Haydn

Last Modified By bolebrown at 30 Apr 2008 - 8:46 AM
woolybill1
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30 Apr 2008 - 9:34 AM
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Even accepting the strictures above this has a lot going for it, Matt. The stray branches are easily disposed of; they don't distract wildly from the composition (good perspective) or the colour composition (the red barge balancing the much larger but muted building). But overall it's the tranquillity that counts.
Regards
Bill

mrswoolybill
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30 Apr 2008 - 9:56 AM
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I do agree that this needs a bit more sky but only a tiny amount, the interest here for me is the way the reflection and the canal bank draw the eye down, and then diagonally across. Height is less important.
Moira

Herge88
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30 Apr 2008 - 10:29 AM
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Thanks for your comments Guys, I can see your point about the house being crammed in, as for the murky water it was my intention to leave it that way I think nice clear water in a canal would just look wrong. Thanks again for your suggestions they are as always much appreciated.

Matt

FredF
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30 Apr 2008 - 10:58 AM
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A classic image. Real colours and sky. Well taken.

Fred

User_Removed
User_Removed (Junior Member)
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England16 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2008 - 12:06 PM
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Nice cheery colourful view Matt, not too far from home either!
Andrew

proz
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205 forum posts United States
30 Apr 2008 - 1:01 PM
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super comp, colors and tones Matt, good sky too.

gary_d
gary_d (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 1:23 PM
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Lovely reflection and plenty of interest. - gary

mikbee
mikbee (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 2:41 PM
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I agree with your comments about the canal Matt.You do not see many crystal clear water ones.The muckier the better for me!!! Nice image.
Mick.

Rock
Rock (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 3:13 PM
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Teriffic capture.

Rock

Skye24Blue
30 Apr 2008 - 3:23 PM
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Great perspective and loads of interesting things to see. Is that the real name of the street?
Mac

Picture postcard material

roverrat
roverrat (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 3:27 PM
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What a lovely scene, great composition.
Alex

Herge88
Herge88 (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 3:50 PM
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Honey Street is the real name Mac.

Matt

imagio
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England1 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2008 - 3:50 PM
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Nice scene and great reflections Matt

Bernie

gerrymac
30 Apr 2008 - 3:51 PM
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Gorgeous image,beautifully presented
Gerry

very goood look like a postcard well done
Dawn

phototime
30 Apr 2008 - 4:48 PM
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A very beautiful image,lovely composition.

Mo

MickyMc
30 Apr 2008 - 5:03 PM
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Lovely colour and great reflections
Mavis

Maiwand
Maiwand (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 7:00 PM
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A lovely quiet and peaceful canal side image Matt. A fine composition.
Ron

pascalg
pascalg (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 7:25 PM
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nice & peaceful scene...

A Booth
A Booth (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 7:36 PM
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superb colours and composition, good detail in the architecture.

rmr
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Wales
30 Apr 2008 - 8:02 PM
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lovely composition and colours again
super capture
mark

sparklep
30 Apr 2008 - 9:07 PM
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Really great dof and lovely. composition

brownsilent
brownsilent (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 9:56 PM
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Lovely scene Matt, and looking at this your recce couldn't have been a total loss!
Johanna

aitchbrown
aitchbrown (e2 Member)
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30 Apr 2008 - 11:45 PM
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Another great one Matt, I love the double chimney breast on the house, in all a very pastoral and quintessential english image. helen x

MandsH
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30 Apr 2008 - 11:58 PM
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Such a lovely scene
Mandy

nickyv32
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1 May 2008 - 8:51 AM
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Lovely scene, love it.

Nicky

Looks like a painting on the wall Matt. Very well done.
Dennis

JudeC
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1 May 2008 - 8:59 AM
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Hi - lovely scene - great composition - Jude.

dianah
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24409 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
1 May 2008 - 2:03 PM
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All your shots would make a beautiful book..there is something very special about the colour.
Di

wyatturp
1 May 2008 - 5:08 PM
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Great picture to look at , well done

DougSmile

JimV
JimV (e2 Member)
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2 May 2008 - 12:45 AM
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Don'r know why the expedition wasn't a success if you got any more shots like this Matt, I like it!
Rgds., Jim

Glostopcat
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5 May 2008 - 6:17 PM
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A beautiful and idyllic canalside scene Matt, lovely colours, composition and reflections.

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