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i like the perspective of this, with the other horse clearly recognisable, all comments welcome.
thanks for looking.
mike

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:28-80
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:horse in field
Username:optik optik
Uploaded:2 Jan 2011 - 8:52 AM
Tags:General, Pets / captive animals, Wildlife / nature
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bfgstew
bfgstew  8668 forum posts England105 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jan 2011 - 9:32 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Mike,

I like the idea and understand the concept you are putting over, the horses eye is nice and sharp, and the second horse nicely out of focus but , as you say recognisable. But, I feel it is overpowering the shot. Rather than have it fill 2/3rds of the frame it really only needs to fill 1/3rd of the frame, (rule of thirds). I feel, this would give both space and room for the second horse to be the subject of the viewers eye, which is the intension?

I hope this helps in some small way?

Regards

Stewart

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optik
optik e2 Member 5optik vcard England
2 Jan 2011 - 10:34 AM

Hi Stewart

Thank you for taking the time to view this, I appreciate your comments and I'm inclined to agree with them.

regards
mike

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