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Also homework with the lighting box. This is a horse on a small pen holder. Some editing was done, for example, the background was pink but I found this colour more fitting.

Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 May 2013 - 8:35 AM
Shutter Speed:1/4000sec
ISO:800
White Balance:White Fluorecent Light
Title:Horse Silhouette
Username:Sone Sone
Uploaded:21 May 2013 - 8:01 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flash / lighting
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S_Psharma
S_Psharma  2 India1 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2013 - 8:12 AM

Stunning image.

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7395 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom971 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2013 - 9:19 AM

I much prefer this to your previous upload from the light box. The subject may be tiny but you have captured the feel of it rearing up, and the placement against the light is good too. I like the fact that you have allowed space for it to kick into. I would prefer to see a little bit more space beneath its hooves, and I would also prefer to see a true square frame - not-quite-square looks a bit flabby, loose, to my eye. The two points go together and I will attempt a Mod - but I appreciate that in practical terms there may have been circumstantial reasons for the placement and crop.
I love what you've done to the colour, I really have difficulty in imagining pink here!
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 21 May 2013 - 9:20 AM

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7395 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom971 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2013 - 9:29 AM

Two Mods uploaded. True square really does look more taut, tidy to me. And I couldn't imagine pink - but I could imagine b&w!
Moira

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2803 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2013 - 2:40 PM

Nicely done. I like Moira's idea of the full square crop, and other than that, I would sharpen this for crisp edges. Your original is probably fine, just needs sharpening here on the site. Your exif data does not show the aperture used, - can you let us know?



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Last Modified By banehawi at 21 May 2013 - 2:41 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2013 - 9:34 PM

Quite effective this one. Strong but obviously contrived. However, it works. You needed a bit more space at the bottom so the hoof is not cropped and one or two bits of the silhouette need a clean up with the clone tool.

Well done.

Paul

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Sone
Sone  1 South Africa
22 May 2013 - 6:06 PM

Hi guys, sorry that I am only replying now. Thank you for all your comments. The aperture was 4.0 . I enjoyed this photo very much.

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