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OK so the horizon is way off. If I straighten it I lose the right flipper.

Is there any solution to this?

Unfortunately taken in the early morning in really dull conditions so using a high ISO (1600) to catch movement.

I am also inclined to convert it to black & white as there was so little colour, do you agree?

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Lens:Canon 70-300 DO IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Humpback
Username:Hazelmouse Hazelmouse
Uploaded:9 May 2011 - 7:55 PM
Tags:Humpback whale, Megaptera novaeangliae, Mexico, Wildlife / nature
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WindowonWildlife
WindowonWildlife e2 Member 5WindowonWildlife vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2011 - 7:58 PM

What a wonderful series you have given us,keep em coming Wink

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whipspeed e2 Member 104040 forum postswhipspeed vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2011 - 8:53 PM

Just added a quick modification for you. Pm me if you need to know any more.

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Jestertheclown

Hi Helen,
I've uploaded a quick mod. which will give you some idea of the effect you could get if you were to take a bit more time over it than I did!
I extended the canvas to the right, then using the rectangular marquee tool, I copied and pasted lumps of the sea from elsewhere being careful to use bits that would look as if they were a continuation of the existing wavetops etc. Then just some cloning, dodging and burning, a little tweak or two with the blur tool to hide the joins. I altered the colour simply by using "auto tone" and finally sharpened it again.
With more time, it would be easy enough to make a better job of the joins. As it is, they're still visible and the colours don't quite match either. All things that could ber put right if you wanted to.
The sky doesn't look too clever either although I think that that's the way it was in the original and my altering the colours has just made it more obvious.
As I've said, I did this pretty quickly but the steps I took could be repeated and if you took a bit more time over it, you'd end up with a pretty impressive image.
Hope this helps.
All done in CS5.

Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 9 May 2011 - 9:07 PM

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10867 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2865 Constructive Critique Points
10 May 2011 - 1:17 AM

What a fantastic opportunity youve had, and a decent shot too.


First thing as mentioned above is straighten; then reduce noise, - I used Noise Ninja in the mods.

Then either way works. The original is as it was, - dull and gray, - so its accurate; and a mono works too, though a straight mono will also look dull and grey. I have uploaded 2 mods, - the second is a warm grey duo toned mono.

Bren has addressed how to crop without losing the flipper, - if you need more assistance or have questions just ask.



Hope this helps,


regards


Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 10 May 2011 - 1:18 AM

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Hazelmouse
10 May 2011 - 4:26 PM

Many thanks for the mods and help. I need to have a go at the suggestions myself.

I knew the sky was noisy - ISO 1600 is not good but all I could use - weather improved immnsely later that day but Humpbacks weren't active.

I love the idea of 'lumps of sea' but know what you mean Bren.

Helen.

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