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This one taken in the adventure playground at Lyme Park. I probably took about 15 shots as it was quite difficult to get right: timing, kids not smiling or looking, eyes closed, background distractions, missed focus, not enough dof etc.
I got a really good one at the top of the swings arc, just as it started to drop, so the girls' hair stood on end. Sadly the focus wasn't quite rightSad
So this was the best of the bunch. Processed from RAW, cropped either side slightly to put the chains in the corners and a boy cloned out bottom left.
She can smile after allWink
Looking forward to your comments and perhaps mods.
Phil

Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50.0 mm f/1.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:31 May 2011 - 11:23 AM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.7
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:In Full Swing
Username:Philo Philo
Uploaded:18 Jun 2011 - 7:30 AM
Tags:Humour / fun, Lyme park, National trust, Playground, Portraits / people, Sports / action, Swing
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Grampy
Grampy  4507 forum posts England71 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2011 - 1:49 PM

A really super shot but oh what a shame the girl in the middle wasn't sitting on the other side, I think the open aperture adds so much to a nice image. Well done
Phill

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Philo e2 Member 352 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2011 - 2:13 PM

The other shot I mentioned above with the poor focus was taken from the other side with both girls looking in the right direction. I just couldn't get every element right in one shot.
Thanks for the feedback again Phill

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Jestertheclown
18 Jun 2011 - 9:27 PM


Quote: timing, kids not smiling or looking, eyes closed, background distractions, missed focus, not enough dof etc.

. . . I've got loads like that!

I see what Phill means about the girl in the middle but then again, I've tried to get shots similar to this of my daughter and her friends and they rarely work.

There's not really anything else wrong with it though.

Bren.

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Philo e2 Member 352 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2011 - 9:55 PM

Cheers Bren, I agree they probably rarely work. You need all the kids involved to be up for it to have a fighting chance.
Phil

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2011 - 5:30 PM

Nice shot. Always wise to shoot plenty - I can get dozens in a situation like this - 7 frames a second!. Might just darken the surrounding area a bit.

Paul

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Philo e2 Member 352 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
20 Jun 2011 - 8:50 PM

I had a bad habit of machine gunning when I first got the Oly but managed to wean myself off it. Perhaps this was a good opportunity to try it again, especially with having a new camera! Good point regarding the background.
Thanks,
Phil

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