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Last one of the series

Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:In the name of the father
Username:Allex2501 Allex2501
Uploaded:28 Feb 2012 - 5:45 AM
Tags:Blac and white, Black & white
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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
28 Feb 2012 - 12:02 PM

A strong portrait, with sharp focus on the eyes and dramatic lighting that works really well. I'd suggest sharpening more selectively so you don't emphasize every pore on her skin and I'd clone out the few white spots that are, I guess, reflections from her ear-rings.

Dave.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9706 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2668 Constructive Critique Points
28 Feb 2012 - 6:06 PM

Ive enjoyed the whole series Allex, and I think this is one of the better ones.

It works as it is, but I had a few idea when I downloaed it.

Theres some detail in her eyes that can be recovered; Its a little too dark such that her head dress is blending into the background, - so lighten a little; crop from the bottom to lower her eyes, and also from the sides to maintain the aspect ratio;remove the bright spot from the end of her nose; I agree with David re skinn detail so I applied a very small amount of skin softening; while cropping, I tilted her head a little more to the right.



Hope this is helpful,



regards


Willie

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