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Still trying new things, this is the second and third from my session with my eldest daughter.Thanks for the comments and critique on the first one, your thoughts on these will be much appreciated.

Cheers Ian

v3 is an addition as suggested by Diana

Camera:Panasonic
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Isolated
Username:imander imander
Uploaded:10 Aug 2009 - 8:56 AM
Tags:Black & white, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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Diana
Diana e2 Member 72011 forum postsDiana vcard Netherlands19 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 10:49 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

V2 is my fave Ian for sure

but if you are OK for a bit of critique, (and you say you are) the view out of the window might be a little more appealling, if she is isolated...then a woods or trees or something other than the roof of another house (and not a very interesting roof at that) even a church ...but something that gives more of a feeling of isolation and loneliness ..that my thoughts anyway, for what they are worth

great series coming up though... enjoying viewing these

Diana

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imander
imander  7388 forum posts United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 11:42 AM

Hi Diana
thankyou for your comment and while I can see where you are comming from, i had a different view point, I was taking it from the lonely child who is watching other children out at play, she's left alone and ignored, may be a better view from the window would of made this clearer.
Thanks again for taking the time to critique
Ian

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Diana
Diana e2 Member 72011 forum postsDiana vcard Netherlands19 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 11:46 AM

OIC then a school or park maybe ..empty roundabout ..or rocking horse, seesaw...........still good though as is Smile

Diana

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Diana e2 Member 72011 forum postsDiana vcard Netherlands19 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 12:22 PM

whao!

thanks for the PM yep perfectos

V3... quick bit of work! that speaks the message loud and clear

great work Ian

Diana

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TyChee e2 Member 9188 forum postsTyChee vcard United States1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 2:30 PM

Great lighting in these shots. Torn between V1 and V2. Excellent work.
Ty

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mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 3:29 PM

Like V3 Ian.A different viewpoint with what you see.A child just waiting on someone out there to go out and play with.She is too shy/frightened to go out herself. Good work. ( but do not make a habit of posting images where I have to ''think'' !!)
Mick.

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SlowSong e2 Member 64537 forum postsSlowSong vcard England29 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 3:58 PM

I like V1. It's like there's nothing else out there except boring roofs. Might as well stay indoors.
Chris

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lifesnapper e2 Member 8lifesnapper vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 5:58 PM

I think, 'Let Me Out To Play' would've been my title for this trio Ian. Good work once again from you both.

John Smile

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Paul_cats e2 Member 861 forum postsPaul_cats vcard Scotland22 Constructive Critique Points
10 Aug 2009 - 8:40 PM

An excellent addition to the isolated series. V2 is excellent if it is intended to be along the same theme as my comment of yesterday which I am glad did not offend. Phew!
Paul

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ChiliMan e2 Member 8135 forum postsChiliMan vcard Singapore17 Constructive Critique Points
13 Aug 2009 - 9:23 AM

Brilliant. Conceptually and lightfully. Your daughter makes a good model, Ian. Tell her that.

Also, Diana's suggestion is superb and V3's a good addition! Nice one, Ian and Diana Smile

A.

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