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Still trying new things, this is the second and third from my session with my eldest daughter.Thanks for the comments and critique on the first one, your thoughts on these will be much appreciated.
v3 is an addition as suggested by Diana
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V2 is my fave Ian for sure
but if you are OK for a bit of critique, (and you say you are) the view out of the window might be a little more appealling, if she is isolated...then a woods or trees or something other than the roof of another house (and not a very interesting roof at that) even a church ...but something that gives more of a feeling of isolation and loneliness ..that my thoughts anyway, for what they are worth
great series coming up though... enjoying viewing these
thankyou for your comment and while I can see where you are comming from, i had a different view point, I was taking it from the lonely child who is watching other children out at play, she's left alone and ignored, may be a better view from the window would of made this clearer.
Thanks again for taking the time to critique
OIC then a school or park maybe ..empty roundabout ..or rocking horse, seesaw...........still good though as is
thanks for the PM yep perfectos
V3... quick bit of work! that speaks the message loud and clear
great work Ian
Great lighting in these shots. Torn between V1 and V2. Excellent work.
Like V3 Ian.A different viewpoint with what you see.A child just waiting on someone out there to go out and play with.She is too shy/frightened to go out herself. Good work. ( but do not make a habit of posting images where I have to ''think'' !!)
I like V1. It's like there's nothing else out there except boring roofs. Might as well stay indoors.
I think, 'Let Me Out To Play' would've been my title for this trio Ian. Good work once again from you both.
An excellent addition to the isolated series. V2 is excellent if it is intended to be along the same theme as my comment of yesterday which I am glad did not offend. Phew!
Brilliant. Conceptually and lightfully. Your daughter makes a good model, Ian. Tell her that.
Also, Diana's suggestion is superb and V3's a good addition! Nice one, Ian and Diana
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