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Yesterday post featured a STEREO version of this photographic illustration today I am uploading the standard shot which needed some modification using Camera-in-the-RAW followed in Adobe Photoshop Elements 7 created a left and by itself to resize met the requirements of this site.

Brand:Pentax Corporation
Camera:Pentax *ist DL2 Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:smc PENTAX-DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6 AL
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:22 Sep 2012 - 11:44 AM
Focal Length:21mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Custom
Title:IVOR WYNNE in 2D
Username:TimothyDMorton TimothyDMorton
Uploaded:4 Oct 2012 - 1:34 AM
Tags:Architecture, Hamilton, IVOR WYNNE, Ontario
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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 4:18 PM

The foreground is rather under exposed due probably to a bright sky and auto metering. You need to brighten the foreground whilst retaining sky density by masking or the dodge tool.

Paul

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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2012 - 1:03 AM

It's a record shot of the inside of a stadium but (and no offence intended) I'm not sure if it has much artistic merit beyond that. Paul mentions the underexposed foreground and underexposed sky. An N/D graduated filter would help this, although in this case it would also darken the building on top of the stand.

I think overall there's a bit of a blue cast - easily fixed in your software. I've loaded a mod where I did a bit of straightening and cropping, altered the colour balance (less blue, more red), and had a quick play with the curve tool just to show how you can rescue some detail from the overexposed sky.

Hope you find something uesful there

Stephen

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TimothyDMorton

Thanks,

Timothy

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