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My first time using a beauty dish yesterday. Here it was high above pointing down and face on, with tri reflectors underneath/infront of Jana

I would be grateful for any constructive critiscism and for ant tips on processing portraits Wink

Camera:Canon EOS 450D
Lens:canon 50mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Jana
Username:Angi_Wallace Angi_Wallace
Uploaded:11 Oct 2010 - 5:01 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, Jana dorickova, Model, Portrait, Portraits / people
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Cormy
Cormy  6 England
11 Oct 2010 - 5:08 PM

Stunning model and great eye contact.Fine portrait.
Cheers
Alan

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akhtarkhan
akhtarkhan  12 United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
11 Oct 2010 - 5:25 PM

Great studio shot. lovely pose of beautiful model.
Akhtar

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pankaj_dutta
11 Oct 2010 - 5:27 PM

Beautiful image, great capture.
PANKAJ

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Buffalo_Tom
Buffalo_Tom e2 Member 82322 forum postsBuffalo_Tom vcard Wales9 Constructive Critique Points
11 Oct 2010 - 5:40 PM

Lovely portrait Angi.
Tom.

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SteveMoulding
SteveMoulding e2 Member 5SteveMoulding vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
11 Oct 2010 - 5:44 PM

A real beauty. This is a very beautiful portrait. A lovely pose and well composed.
Steve.

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Alvar
Alvar  7 France2 Constructive Critique Points
11 Oct 2010 - 5:46 PM

Nice pose detail and model.

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11 Oct 2010 - 6:04 PM

pure quality.

Al.

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DouglasMorley
11 Oct 2010 - 6:23 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Ditto the above comments. But you did ask for more than just praise.

The shine on Jana's nose could possibly have been prevented by make up. Perhaps you could have lowered the dish to put more light in her face thus avoiding face shadows especially under her eyes. Or you could have adjusted the tri flector with the same goal in mind.

Then again, as portrait work is so subjective, you may not agree. I think that the real tip is to try lots of set ups and then see what you and your model think.

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
11 Oct 2010 - 7:09 PM

Good portriat image Angi like the pose and details.
Regards Richard

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Angi_Wallace e2 Member 6172 forum postsAngi_Wallace vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
11 Oct 2010 - 7:21 PM


Quote: Ditto the above comments. But you did ask for more than just praise.

The shine on Jana's nose could possibly have been prevented by make up. Perhaps you could have lowered the dish to put more light in her face thus avoiding face shadows especially under her eyes. Or you could have adjusted the tri flector with the same goal in mind.

Then again, as portrait work is so subjective, you may not agree. I think that the real tip is to try lots of set ups and then see what you and your model think.

Thanks Douglas Wink I have a chance to play with this set up soon and will certainly play around more

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Nolly e2 Member 9Nolly vcard England
11 Oct 2010 - 8:00 PM

Lovely model and what eyes.

Nolly

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bromley-smith
11 Oct 2010 - 9:23 PM

A beautiful portrait.
Tony

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