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Hi folks

My thanks to all who have commented, and left feedback on my previous portrait images of Leigh and Natalie

I really do appreciate the comments, they all go towards my improvement. Cheers.

So here we have Janine. A lovely young lady, who has little modelling experience, so we made a great pairing, lol.

She was absolutely lovely to work with, and I believe we made some really good images together.

Over to you guys, how have i done?

p.s. I know I have a little bit of burn out down the right side of the image, the sun was fierce, and I actually dont mind it too much. I think her smile outshines that. lol.

Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Lens:EF-S17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Focal Length:56mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:none
ISO:100
Flash:off camera
Title:Janine
Username:Anthony Anthony
Uploaded:24 May 2012 - 9:35 AM
Tags:30d, Face, Female, Flash, Grass, Janine, Model, Park, Portraits / people, Smile, Sunshine
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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 11:16 AM

Like the natural smile and use of the location Anthony. Only niggle is the blade of grass going horizontal, needs cloning out, as it distracts
Regards Richard

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 11:17 AM

thank you Richard, if thats all you can find wrong with it, then Im pleased, lol

My thanks for the feedback.

Anthony

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puertouk  21072 forum posts United Kingdom17 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 12:46 PM

Hi Tony, did a quick mod in Photoshop. Hope you like it
Stephen

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 1:22 PM

thanks Stephen, not bad Smile

Im glad you were not pointing out anything obvious on this shot, so i must be improving, lol.

Anthony

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sherlob e2 Member 82325 forum postssherlob vcard United Kingdom125 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 6:03 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Getting better Anthony. I think this one is much more natural, has good colour and nice dof, and a reasonable use of fill flash on her face. My only gripe is that she has a tree trunk directly behind her head and there is a point of burn out on her forehead.

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55jase e2 Member 8186 forum posts55jase vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 6:35 PM

Such a beauty. great all round shot.
jase

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
24 May 2012 - 10:37 PM

thank you everyone, really do appreciate the feedback. Good to know im getting better, lol

Anthony

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