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Title:Jasmin Desktop
Username:mapper mapper
Uploaded:14 Dec 2010 - 5:08 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Digitally manipulated, Jasmin, Portraits / people
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acousticmist
14 Dec 2010 - 5:19 PM

Excellent...........Martin

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saeidNL
saeidNL  4 Netherlands3 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2010 - 5:32 PM

Excellent work here,very well done.
saeid

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artcubis
artcubis  7 United States6 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2010 - 5:36 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The eyes and composition is excellent, magnetic, lovely.

However, too much airbrushing loses personality of the face that are important elements of a portrait.

Catherine

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mapper
mapper  5 Canada
14 Dec 2010 - 5:53 PM

I agree artcubis. I was faced with a few problems in this photo that I just cant resolve. The original picture had this yellowness on her right side face (our left side) that i just couldn't remove. Its still there but not as much. You can still see it and its really bugging me.

Thing i love about this shot is the 3d depth it has. Took me a long time to achieve this. This is far removed from the normal fantasy type themes im more known to work on. Smile Results are getting good though, thanks for the feedback people!

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jammbulator
14 Dec 2010 - 9:49 PM

gets my vote

Jamm

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72274 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom68 Constructive Critique Points
15 Dec 2010 - 11:18 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Lovely portrait mapper - that yellow/green toning was my distraction moreso than any retouch work.
I just had a quick play with a selective colour layer in ps, and using the yellow option, set cyan to -30, magenta to +40, yellow to -25, and black to -25, you will get something with a lot less noticeable yellow.
More tweaking will probably yield something better...
Hope this helps.

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mapper
mapper  5 Canada
16 Dec 2010 - 6:36 AM

arhb, Thanks for the help, im playing around with your values and trying it, still having issues. i want to keep the same image color/tone. Ive never come across this problem before. The yellowness is there big time in the original shot.

Its like the dark color shadow values for that side turned yellowish from a reflection or something. Im not familiar with the photography world, i just try work on end stuff like this. Its all new to me... sorry.

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