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| Camera: | Nikon D3000  Check out Nikon Nation! |
| Lens: | 18/55 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Title: | Keep clear |
| Username: | 
dusfim |
| Uploaded: | 29 Oct 2010 - 7:06 PM |
| Tags: | Photo journalism, Street photography |
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| Votes: | 8 |
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Whereas the focussing looks sharp enough for me, as I can clearly see that I should KEEP CLEAR, I think there are problems with the exposure, as the sky appears burnt out.
I am glad to see that the composition has a beating heart. I must admit to being prejudiced: I prefer photographs of people to photographs of anything else. However, while I am on the subject of composition, I do wonder whether this photograph needs straightening? Also, I think the composition would have been improved if you were to have positioned the lady in the frame according to the rule of thirds: that is to say, more towards the bottom left-hand corner. I think it is better to show more of where she is going than where she has been.
Yes I agree that it needs some straightening, also regarding the exposure because of the sky appears burnt out. I admit that that sometimes I harry to upload my photos because it will be late in the evening.
Thanks to you all for your constructive critique to improve my quality.
Dusfim
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