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Camera:Nikon D3000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18/55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Keep clear
Username:dusfim dusfim
Uploaded:29 Oct 2010 - 7:06 PM
Tags:Photo journalism, Street photography
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Briwooly
Briwooly  9452 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
29 Oct 2010 - 7:13 PM

Great contrast old and new works for me

Brian.................................

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andylea
andylea  637 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
29 Oct 2010 - 7:57 PM

works for me to brilliant detail and colour a beauty Wink
andy

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NeilWigan
NeilWigan  4 England15 Constructive Critique Points
29 Oct 2010 - 8:26 PM

good street shot well done.

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metro074
metro074 e2 Member 4metro074 vcard Australia8 Constructive Critique Points
29 Oct 2010 - 9:31 PM

A wonderful composition. Past and present coming together. The detail is wonderful.
Carol

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Jovana63
Jovana63  4 Canada
30 Oct 2010 - 1:46 AM

Lovely colours! Very well done!

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tashi
tashi  42 Constructive Critique Points
30 Oct 2010 - 8:29 AM

Very nice capture. Well taken.

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 8Joline vcard United States52 Constructive Critique Points
30 Oct 2010 - 12:12 PM

Very fine street photography.
May a suggest a slight counter clockwise rotation to straighten the verticals a bit. It all seems leaning to the right.

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PeterDSmith
PeterDSmith e2 Member 6PeterDSmith vcard United Kingdom46 Constructive Critique Points
30 Oct 2010 - 12:19 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Whereas the focussing looks sharp enough for me, as I can clearly see that I should KEEP CLEAR, I think there are problems with the exposure, as the sky appears burnt out.

I am glad to see that the composition has a beating heart. I must admit to being prejudiced: I prefer photographs of people to photographs of anything else. However, while I am on the subject of composition, I do wonder whether this photograph needs straightening? Also, I think the composition would have been improved if you were to have positioned the lady in the frame according to the rule of thirds: that is to say, more towards the bottom left-hand corner. I think it is better to show more of where she is going than where she has been.

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dusfim
dusfim  4 Malta
30 Oct 2010 - 2:03 PM

Yes I agree that it needs some straightening, also regarding the exposure because of the sky appears burnt out. I admit that that sometimes I harry to upload my photos because it will be late in the evening.
Thanks to you all for your constructive critique to improve my quality.

Dusfim

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