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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 May 2013 - 7:32 PM
Focal Length:28mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/13.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Kellie kneeling on chair
Username:cyman1964uk cyman1964uk
Uploaded:28 May 2013 - 2:50 PM
Tags:Blonde, Chair, Girl, Heels, Kneeling, Portrait, Portraits / people, Pretty, Sexy, Short dress, Tight dress
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dudler
dudler Critique Team 11126 forum postsdudler vcard England365 Constructive Critique Points
28 May 2013 - 6:54 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a lovely idea, with great light and a fine pose.

There are two compositional issues.

First, the viewpoint is quite high, leading to unnatural perspective. This is often the result of (tall) male togs photographing shorter female models. Kneeling gives impressive results: as does going in close with a wide-angle lens and really exaggerating the effect...

Second, a more generous crop to include the shadow of Kellie's hand and all of the leg of the chair would avoid the eye looking for the missing bits. Minor, but if you see it, it distracts.

Finally, I'm guessing this was taken at Brightlights? That looks mightly like one of a pair of trendy but uncomfortable chairs I (deliberately, and with the owners' consent!) left there a week last Saturday... If so, I'm delighted that it's serving well!

Last Modified By dudler at 28 May 2013 - 6:55 PM

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cyman1964uk
cyman1964uk e2 Member 5cyman1964uk vcard United Kingdom
28 May 2013 - 8:54 PM

Thanks, dudler for the compliments. I take on board your points; wish I had kept her hand shadow and the bottom of the chair leg - as a rule I always try to keep things 'whole' in the frame.
To be honest, though, this was a bit of an afterthought, as I shot it from in front of both of the lights and they were positioned that there was just not enough room for me to capture it all.

Yes indeed, it was shot at Brightlights and Kellie was only there on that night for about 90 mins, shared between 4 togs in 2 outfits. So, we were all pushed for time and changing the lights would have been (rightfully) frowned upon, so I grabbed what I could here.

Thanks for the chairs - yes, they did get a deal of usage last Weds!

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