Kidshot

banehawi (Critique Team)

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30 Sep 2008 - 9:58 PM

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Youve done a good job with the equipment you have, and a very cute model.

I have a couple of suggestions, which Im sure you probably already know about:

The background is a little distracting, - try to have her further away from it, and blur it with a relatively shallow dof (you dont mention which aperture you used. Or use a plain background, - black velvet can work well if shes sitting on a chair/couch and cant move away too much.

The lighting is quite good, though I would check the white balance with this lighting, - put a plain white or grey card in the same light, take a shot, and use this to calibrate white balance.

Crop a little off the bottom, - not only to remove the text on the book, but to place the eyes on a third.

Ive loaded a mod with all of the above incorporated, - and have used curves to calibrate white and black.


Hope this is useful

Regards

Willie