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based on yesterday's comments I've amended Kilchurn Castle again - what do you think? Many thanks for your comments and advise. Isabella

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Title:KIlchurn Castle - var 1
Username:Bellai Bellai
Uploaded:14 Mar 2011 - 11:39 PM
Tags:Architecture, Castles, Landscape, Landscape / travel
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RonnieAG
RonnieAG e2 Member 4139 forum postsRonnieAG vcard Scotland110 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2011 - 12:34 AM

I prefer V 1 where you have retained the f/g but just cropped a bit off the right to take the Castle off centre stage: I am less keen on V 2 and 3 where you have lost the mountain top. But V 1 is an improvement compositionally.
Ronnie.

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nonur
nonur e2 Member 5nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2011 - 1:48 AM

Each a cracker! Great light and compo! Congrats and regards, Nezih.

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CherryMartin
15 Mar 2011 - 4:03 AM

beautiful shot.

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SUE118
SUE118 e2 Member 6SUE118 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2011 - 7:28 AM

4 superb shots.

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CathR
CathR  7139 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
15 Mar 2011 - 4:35 PM

You have created quite a different feel with V4 Isabella. The castle is perhaps a little overexposed but it sits nicely in the landscape with the mountains/clouds arranged well behind. There are some aspects which do not fit into the "rules" like the castle is fairly central and the tree is quite near the edge of the frame but it hangs together well somehow. I like the shadows of the trees in the foreground.

In V1 - 3 you have nice light on the castle making it a lovely golden colour. I like V3 with just the small clump of trees and the castle but excluding the top of the mountain is a pity. Sometimes it is difficult to get that perfect combination!

Best wishes

Catherine

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Bellai
Bellai  6 Scotland
15 Mar 2011 - 10:42 PM

Hi All,
Thanks very much for your comments, I've got even more to think about now - Regards Isabella

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kinfatric
kinfatric  9550 forum posts Scotland9 Constructive Critique Points
16 Dec 2011 - 6:54 PM

I particularly like version 4 for the light and shadows in the scene.

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Michaela_Solway
Michaela_Solway e2 Member 3Michaela_Solway vcard
5 Mar 2012 - 7:50 PM

Like the capture of light on the mountain top and lovely composition in V1 very well done on the set

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