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Camera:Canon EOS 450D
Lens:sigma 24-70
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:kiss
Username:chinasky chinasky
Uploaded:23 Jan 2009 - 12:12 AM
Tags:Black & white, Digitally manipulated, Kiss, Portraits / people
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glazzaro
glazzaro e2 Member 970 forum postsglazzaro vcard United States23 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2009 - 12:48 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the shot in terms of catching the moment, however I think that the shot itself has a harsh mixture of light and dark areas that slightly distract from the composition. I think less shadows and more light would make this BW shot stand out more. Post work you might want to consider running a noise reduction against the facial areas, reduce shadows and maybe apply a soft filter to the shot.

Greg

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2009 - 3:09 PM

The moment and timing is nice as Greg says, - but it is a little dark and soft overall.


I have loaded a cropped, lighter mod as version 1, and mod 2 is just a solarization filter.

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Willie

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