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i shot this when finding new perspective of KLCC.
and found this works for me in B&W

what do you think guys?

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:21 Aug 2012 - 5:45 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.4
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:KLCC Malaysia
Username:adentenur adentenur
Uploaded:26 Aug 2012 - 5:11 PM
Tags:Architecture, Black & white, Landscape / travel
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Jestertheclown
26 Aug 2012 - 11:42 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the detail in this and the fact that everything's well focused.
I particularly like the idea that you've had here and to some extent, I think it's worked.
Sadly though, that the composition just doesn't work for me. I think that you needed to concentrate on the two towers in the centre, perhaps as a portrait and leave the other bits out.
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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adentenur
adentenur  2 Indonesia
27 Aug 2012 - 1:53 PM

wow, it worked!
thx bren. Smile

but i still like di landscape format. and your right about the building at the left and right side. i think if i edited in photoshop to remove that building that would works right?

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Jestertheclown
27 Aug 2012 - 2:20 PM

I certainly think it would look better.
I kept thinking last night when I looked at this that there was something wrong with the composition but I just can't decide quite what it is!
It's one of those shots where, if it were mine, I'd make a whole pile of different crops and adjustments and probably never really decide which one worked the best.
I should also have added, because I did think it at the time, that B/W is the way to go in my opinion.
I really think Ade, that this is going to be a success story. You just need to try changing a few things. I think it will come right all of a sudden.

Bren.

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