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I like this shot of the laban dance school in deptford se london. I tried to straighten the righthand verticals but couldnt get it right, so I've had to overlook it.
C&C welcome.

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:10-22
Recording media:digital
Title:Laban
Username:stix stix
Uploaded:2 May 2006 - 10:56 PM
Tags:Architecture, Modern architecture
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TommyStr
TommyStr  8 Norway3 Constructive Critique Points
2 May 2006 - 11:02 PM

Quite unual shot somehow...really like it. I'm glad you didn't straighten the verticals! I like the dark blue sky, the reflections and the boy running! Only minor thing that would make it better imo would be a different comp (gets split in the middle), have you tried to crop off some from one of the sides (would go for 3-4 cm. off the right)? Still an excellent image though! Smile
Tommy

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vparmar
vparmar  10 United Kingdom
2 May 2006 - 11:15 PM

excellent image - like the blue sky - well done

vinny

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angelamary
2 May 2006 - 11:15 PM

Amazing reflections and curves. The foreground movement caught spot-on. Very well caught!

It might be possible to move that bottom corner in with 'edit-transform' and 'warp', but the crop afterwards would lose the picture edge, so I think it's fine as it is.

Good shot.

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AlanBW
AlanBW  8 England
2 May 2006 - 11:22 PM

Excellent image, well taken

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phowtow
phowtow  1046 forum posts
3 May 2006 - 1:01 AM

a great architectural image, in more ways than one, yes its of architecture, but the composition is very robust, with sweeping lines and strong colours.

10/10.

Chris.

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robway
robway e2 Member 9317 forum postsrobway vcard Wales
3 May 2006 - 5:33 AM

Cracking shot. Love the building and the deep blue sky.
John

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danbaker1988
3 May 2006 - 6:19 AM

Great capture, nice colours.

Dan

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lifesnapper
lifesnapper e2 Member 8lifesnapper vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
3 May 2006 - 11:42 AM

The boy running towards the building really makes this one. Almost 3D effect, wonderful.

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xinia
xinia  954 forum posts
8 May 2006 - 9:26 AM

superb Martin

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annefromleo
15 May 2006 - 9:46 PM

well done, love these type of architectural image, I find correcting verticals a challenge!
For me the child distracts, still love the image, click
Anne

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ericfaragh
ericfaragh  11121 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
22 May 2006 - 2:53 PM

Powerful lines and curves, great use of reflection, good colour with the figure adding a sense of scale.

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plstsn
plstsn  8
16 Jun 2006 - 1:07 AM

Cracking shot and reflection control.
Stunningly well composed.

Torben

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dreamflower
24 Oct 2006 - 11:28 PM

Wonderful pic of modern architecture...click

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kylespins
kylespins  7107 forum posts United Kingdom
25 Nov 2007 - 10:22 PM

Great shot, Im a student that studies at Laban and have seen many good shot of the building but not quite as crisp as this. If u ever need any dancers for a project... don't hesitate to ask. Well done, Kyle

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artcubis
artcubis  7 United States6 Constructive Critique Points
10 Nov 2010 - 10:26 PM

Good angle to show the curve and stairs for depth.
Child running is a nice addition for perspective.

Catherine

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