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a Gothic Laura in the turret at Thorsby. first draft, probably needs more work. any ideas how to develop it further.

thanks for looking
Phil

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300S Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Nov 2012 - 12:09 PM
Focal Length:17mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/640sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:320
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
White Balance:Auto
Title:laura
Username:NEWMANP NEWMANP
Uploaded:13 Jan 2013 - 9:09 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated/goths, Portraits / people
Votes:17

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SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2013 - 6:10 PM

I like the mood, the use of selective colour and toning, the eye contact, the whole composition and the inclusion of the birds a lot. Not quite sure about the hair over her chin - maybe a little more of it would make it look more natural (though it may be natural!). I think I would definitely darken down areas of the right hand side - the brighter horizon lifts the mood in a non gothic way, and also draws my eye away from her face. More of a vignette, maybe? Sue

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61583 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2013 - 7:41 PM

thanks Sue
the hairs natural-ish and quite red, i think, it could be a wig i never met her before this and she had the cloak on and i asked her to pose for me. it was just has she had it, i think it just happened to pull across her chin when she turned. it wasnt the same of some later frames but the expressions were not right by then.

i agree about darkening down, this was pretty apparant when i did a test print.
Phil

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joshwa
joshwa ePHOTOzine Staff 3601 forum postsjoshwa vcard United Kingdom
13 Mar 2013 - 4:37 PM

I like it, but being familiar with the location Wink I think the scale looks a bit wrong.

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