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Yet another of Hannah at the asylum on Wednesday evening.

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:Canon 50 mm 1.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Lazy Days.
Username:proberts proberts
Uploaded:2 Jul 2010 - 9:58 AM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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Ian-Munro
Ian-Munro  6200 forum posts Wales15 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:04 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Nice idea and the pose for me is pretty cool. However again I see that under her eyes are dark and this maybe due to her eye make up. I know we had the same issue the time I was there and I think it can be corrected.

I think this would be a cracking B&W with the use of the spot healing brush and the blur tool under her eyes. Its what I did with my image.

Ian

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Ian-Munro
Ian-Munro  6200 forum posts Wales15 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:07 AM

I am gonna do a MOD lunchtime fella, don't know if it will help Wink

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Buffalo_Tom
Buffalo_Tom e2 Member 82322 forum postsBuffalo_Tom vcard Wales9 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:08 AM

Like the perspective Andrew and a fine image again.
Tom.

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Tonyd3
Tonyd3  101009 forum posts United Kingdom15 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:09 AM

Hi Andrew

The 1.8 does work then, i agree with Ian on the eyes, but i would also remove the highlights behind her too in the top right corner.

Nice work mate.
Regards
Tony

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saeidNL
saeidNL  4 Netherlands3 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:10 AM

Top class image................
very well taken and presented.
saeid

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acousticmist
2 Jul 2010 - 10:21 AM

Nice shot . Martin

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proberts
proberts  10218 forum posts Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:43 AM

Cheers everyone. Yes Ian. She does wear a hell of a lot of make up around her eyes. I have pulled them back some what without going overboard and looking false. Will ask her next time not to wear so much.
LOL Tony. Yes it does work in this. Just Wink Will work on this again and do a repost i think because i really like this one because of the catch light.
Andrew.

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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 11:02 AM

What Ian and Tony said.... Smile
The laying on her side stuff would do well too, I think

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Carrie_1
Carrie_1  4 Wales6 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 12:21 PM

I have taken the liberty of uploading 2 mods.
For the colour one I used the clone tool on low opacity to lighten the make up under her eyes, then I dodged around the eyes a little, plus a little shadow/highlight, finally I lightened the skin tones just a touch.
For the black and white I used the colour pic as a basis and used some orange filter for effect.
Like the pic. Caroline

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 12:33 PM

Good comp and details capture, some good advice re the heavy shadows under the eyes. Agree with Tony re the highlights on the RHS. Good work.
Regards Richard

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proberts
proberts  10218 forum posts Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 12:49 PM

Cheers everyone and thanks very much for the mods.
Really liked the coloured one Caroline. When i tried,it looked to false. Probably took it to far though.
I know Cole,but dont really want to copy someones elses photo.
Andrew.

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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 12:51 PM


Quote: I know Cole,but dont really want to copy someones elses photo.

Yeap, then make it your own, tweak it, add your own thing.
If you think you can......you can..... Wink LOL

Looking at the mod, I really like it in B&W

Last Modified By Coleslaw at 2 Jul 2010 - 12:52 PM

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geoffrey baker
geoffrey baker e2 Member 10496 forum postsgeoffrey baker vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 1:51 PM

Very nice Smile
I agree about the eyes, no doubt she's been crying cos you wouldn't buy her any shoes Wink

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Scaramanga
Scaramanga e2 Member 637 forum postsScaramanga vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 2:23 PM

Great pov.

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ge22y
ge22y  6115 forum posts Wales12 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 3:14 PM

Pose works well mate, next time get her to bring her make up along, then you can tell her what you want.

Gez

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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 8855 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom173 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 3:56 PM

I did a couple of mono conversions. The split toned image hasn't loaded properly and I don't know what happened to it.

A lovely portrait shot.

Alan.

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dathersmith
2 Jul 2010 - 4:55 PM

Love the eye contact, nice one.

Darren.

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proberts
proberts  10218 forum posts Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 5:06 PM

Cheers everyone. Never had so many mods lol.
Good idea Gez. Will ask her next time.
Lol Alan. Well it is different having that effect Wink
Andrew.

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Ian-Munro
Ian-Munro  6200 forum posts Wales15 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 8:11 PM

Some great MODs. Paintmans is the biz for me.

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andy_AHG
andy_AHG  5106 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jul 2010 - 10:40 PM

A really beautiful portrait.

Andy

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