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Autumn colours in Knarsdale. This is a disused railway line

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF-S18-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:12 Oct 2012 - 10:05 AM
Focal Length:44mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/14.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:Leafy lane
Username:Graysshootin Graysshootin
Uploaded:14 Feb 2013 - 9:26 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2013 - 10:05 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

hello,
there are a lot of nice things about this image and it has quality and good light.

but
it really looks as if you were undecided as to whether the top half or the bottom half should be the image and you couldnt decide so you tried to include everything.
ill do two mods to show what i mean. there are two super compositiopns in there waiting to come out but as it stands its too split on the centre. other wise cant fault it
Phil

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Jestertheclown
14 Feb 2013 - 10:49 PM

Phil's mods. are good but I'd want to increase the contrast slightly as well.
Also, despite there not being a genuinely vertical line in it, I don't think it's straight.
Look at the end of the path.

Bren.

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Graysshootin
Graysshootin e2 Member 2Graysshootin vcard United Kingdom
14 Feb 2013 - 11:49 PM

Wow thanks Phil, I think I prefer the second version. thanks for the advice and comments

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Fogey
Fogey e2 Member 184 forum postsFogey vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
16 Feb 2013 - 10:57 AM

Of course, had the shot been taken from a lower viewpoint, then the leaves on the ground as well as the leaves on the trees could have been shown to good effect.

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paulbroad
paulbroad e2 Member 789 forum postspaulbroad vcard United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
16 Feb 2013 - 6:41 PM

A nice image in the first place and all the mods work too. It is possibly a touch over exposed, but light must have been low to use 1600ISO. I prefer the landscape mod but I really would like a figure walking either tiwards or away from the camera well back in the composition. That would be the finishing touch for me.

Paul

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Graysshootin
Graysshootin e2 Member 2Graysshootin vcard United Kingdom
12 Apr 2013 - 11:57 AM


Quote: Phil's mods. are good but I'd want to increase the contrast slightly as well.
Also, despite there not being a genuinely vertical line in it, I don't think it's straight.
Look at the end of the path.

Bren.

The end of the path wasn't straight.

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