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the european causeway leaving larne for the open sea i took this shot from islandmagee

Title:leaving larne harbour
Username:williamsloan williamsloan
Uploaded:9 Feb 2012 - 9:02 PM
Camera:Nikon D50 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Jul 2009 - 8:12 PM
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banehawi
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9 Feb 2012 - 10:16 PM
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Very impressive shot William. You really get the sens of size with this as youve shot from near water levell


I would just suggest a slight straightening, using the cranes for a vertical reference, and a little contrast and colour balance to make it stand out.



All done in the mod,


Regards


Willie

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Ayoob
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10 Feb 2012 - 2:19 AM
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Well seen and beautiful capture...........Grin

paulbroad
10 Feb 2012 - 8:01 AM
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Willie covers it - a strong image which needs a bit of work. Straighten up and put some contrast back.

Paul

mhfore
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England148 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2012 - 11:48 AM
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Hi William, you've been offered some good advice and I agree, the main thing is to straighten the image as the ship feels like it's going to slip to the left. I think the crops a little tight at the top and I would have liked to see just a touch of sky above the aerial, a bit more contrast helps along with a slight tone balance.

I've streched the sky on my mod along with the other things mentioned to give you some idea.

Take care

Martin

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