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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:18-200mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Oct 2010 - 6:14 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Left Behind
Username:AlgonquinChris AlgonquinChris
Uploaded:21 May 2011 - 11:33 AM
Tags:Architecture, General
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davey_griffo
21 May 2011 - 12:14 PM

I like this sort of abandoned industrial site myself. Great angle, the building looks very imposing.
Some description as to where would have been nice.

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AlgonquinChris
21 May 2011 - 12:28 PM

This is an old flour mill in the Finger Lakes Region of New York State.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2011 - 1:25 PM

A nice shot. Lots of leaning verticals due to the wide angle and closeness, but it helps make the building appear more imposing.

I wonder if you had an opportunity to move further back, and include more of the mill down to the ground, which may have been a good shot also, - Im sure theres a good reason you didnt.

Nice exposure against that ominous sky.


Regards

Willie

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Goggz
Goggz  72301 forum posts Wales72 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2011 - 5:31 PM

To my mind a crop removing that small annex and the wire floating off the screen would help a lot to concentrate the eye on the imposing central column and those interesting silo's. Nice exposure.

Cheers, Goggz

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Jestertheclown
21 May 2011 - 9:44 PM

Black and white anyone . . . ?

I've uploaded a mod.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
22 May 2011 - 7:51 AM

Nice image, well done. Would be even better from an angle, probably to the left giving even more distorting - a benefit. Mono, yes, but high contrast.

Paul

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