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another shot of Leigh, this tim with the wind in her hair.

Feedback is still welcome, either on this shot or the previous 2.

Thank you

Anthony

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Leigh 3
Username:Anthony Anthony
Uploaded:20 May 2012 - 9:17 AM
Tags:30d, Canon, Leigh, Liverpool, Model shoot, Portraits / people
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puertouk
puertouk  21056 forum posts United Kingdom17 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 9:49 AM

Tony, you need to put your EXIF data on, so we know what you are shooting, as this may help us with your images.
Stephen

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 9:54 AM

Hi Stephen

I shot this image at 1/400th sec, f8, 100 ISO, with flash off camera, at 68mm focal length.

Anthony

Last Modified By Anthony at 20 May 2012 - 9:56 AM

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cassiecat
cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 10:01 AM

although i like tge curve of tghe back i wonder about cropping at the bottom of the rail. lesley

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 10:04 AM

I did consider that Lesley, but I then lost (in my opinion) too much of the dress. The rail was there, so I dont mind leaving something real and solid and tangible in the shot. If it had been a crisp packet or something, yeah, gone in a second, but as its a solid thing thats really there, I decided to leave it. It also gives a little placement as to where the shot was taken. For example, it must be waterside, as there's a life ring bottom right, so she's clearly looking out across water.

I hope that makes sense, and I do value your input, so keep it coming. Smile

How have you been anyway, getting out much with the camera?

Anthony

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puertouk  21056 forum posts United Kingdom17 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 10:23 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Tony, put your image in PS camera raw > Hue/saturation and turned it into B & W. Made adjustment with the adjustment brush on the sky, contrast, highlights, shadows and clarity. In PS, I copied the background layer > new layer > eye dropper tool on her skin and painted over her arm to try and reduce the mottle effect on her skin. I then painted her face > multiply > opacity 25%. I then removed the glare from her sun glasses. Hope you like the mod.
Stephen

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 10:30 AM

Hi Stephen, thanks for the modification.

Im still not convinced that black and white is the way to go with these images, although I do truly appreciate your efforts. I like the colour versions, if Im totally honest as good as they are, im not keen on the mono.

I like your sky, and the effort you went to definately shows, so many many thanks, but I still prefer mine. Hope you dont mind.

I'll take the technique advice on board and see if I can use any of that for the next upload, so my thanks for the info.

Anthony

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cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 10:31 AM

hi anthony, hardly been out with the camera, not been well, and in agony this weekend, but need to try and get out soon.lesley

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Anthony  125645 forum posts Scotland17 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 10:32 AM

aw no, wel listen get yourself well again, and when your ready let me know, we'll get a shoot in somewhere. Smile

Hope you feel better soon.

Anthony

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Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England207 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2012 - 2:27 PM

Nicely worked here capture Anthony
Regards Richard

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