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Picture taken in a hurry on a street in Boston -
I was running backwards as the couple approached and I had to retreat. Beautiful bride and dress -
and they're so happy!

Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:Canon 17-40 mm L lens
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Life Goes On
Username:nonibones nonibones
Uploaded:21 Mar 2010 - 10:42 AM
Tags:Photo journalism
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139444 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
21 Mar 2010 - 1:38 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a good candid taken in less than ideal circumstances!

You have captured the happiness of the couple very well and even the other characters in the photo do not really detract from it. It is somewhat underexposed; this has been caused by the bride's dress fooling the camera meter. That is easily sorted by use of (e.g.) the shadows/highlights tool in PS. I have done this in the mod I've uploaded for you.

But overall - a good effort.

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104023 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
21 Mar 2010 - 6:51 PM

excellent reportage type shot...first view suggested there was more to be seen. The mod brings that out

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nonibones
nonibones  4 Australia2 Constructive Critique Points
22 Mar 2010 - 6:16 AM

Thank you very much for your advices. Yes, I see the difference, and how you've made that happen. I spent hours on this effort trying hard to get a good result. And you are right - there was more to be seen, and I've cloned out a few things e.g. a notice right between the faces! - so I fear that this is noticeable.
I like the three men in the background myself. I will spend some more time on this now .. thanks again! Noni.

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imagio  8 England1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2010 - 6:08 PM

Its a good classy contemporary shot taken on the run..backwards!..

Bernie

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