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Hi
Trying to get a little soft expression.
Difficult sometimes with shadows when you have no time.

Brand:NIKON
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 50mm f1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:17 Jul 2010 - 8:25 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
ISO:1250
Title:Linn
Username:totti totti
Uploaded:4 Oct 2013 - 6:22 PM
Tags:Children photography, Portraits / people
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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2013 - 6:46 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Such a high ISO again. Nice shot with your characteristic softness which works here. Ideally you need to be much closer with just her face and the bubble for a more dramatic composition.

Paul

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7435 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1024 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2013 - 7:39 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Gorgeous, your pastel look again. The sheen on the bubble is especially effective.
I'd simplify slightly. It doesn't need that sprig of green leaf behind her head, that takes the eye away from her face. And it doesn't need the hem of her dress - as above... A tighter crop would work better for me.
Mod to follow, but those are the only changes I'd make.
Moira

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2013 - 10:30 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A really nice soft and delicate portrayal of a moment in time, the lifespan of a bubble.

I noticed that leaf too, but in addition, - a preference for me would that the "horizon", the meeting of grass and greenery would not intersect with her forehead.

Mod loaded. Just a suggestion.



regards


Willie

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