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This is one of my Teachers At School
I took this image to incorporate
Different elements of his life
His Name Tag shows his working like
Wedding Ring Shows of his family
& Finally The little thing that makes him, him
the bottle of water he brings in everyday

Thanks To Mr.Peretta

Title:Little Features Of Him
Username:Hands945 Hands945
Uploaded:8 Feb 2012 - 5:46 PM
Camera:Sony A290
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Mar 2011 - 12:45 AM
Tags:Close up, Portraits / people
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Jestertheclown
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8 Feb 2012 - 10:11 PM
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Different and I certainly like the train of thought that's gone into it.

Without setting the world on fire, its not a bad shot.

My greatest criticism has to be that it's very tightly cropped. A little more room at the top and bottom would have meant that you'd have included the whole of his hand and his favoured water bottle. With all of that included, a square crop might have worked well.

Hope this helps.

Bren.

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paulbroad
9 Feb 2012 - 9:02 AM
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Technically very well done - you can handle a camera. Without your explanation, he could be nything and, whilst I am a great supporter of filling the frame, you may have needed something in there to give more of a story line - not sure what though.

Paul

Focus_Man
9 Feb 2012 - 10:01 AM
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A good idea but I am a believer in 'a picture paints a thousand words'; in this case that does not apply. I personally would prefer pictures that can stand alone without description. (We do need descriptions here in CG however to aid asessment, so I discount this from my statement)

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 9 Feb 2012 - 10:01 AM
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