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Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-55.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Jan 2014 - 1:18 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/800sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Auto
Title:Lonely
Username:derrymaine derrymaine
Uploaded:11 Jan 2014 - 4:46 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Landscape / travel, Portraits / people, Specialist / abstract, Street
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pablophotographer
pablophotographer e2 Member 3496 forum postspablophotographer vcard 188 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jan 2014 - 5:57 PM

Hello derrymaine

I am very tempted to tear your picture, in a polite way Smile , and leave the man on the top right part of the frame, in a superficial trambala with only one player (surprisingly lifted!)

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derrymaine
derrymaine e2 Member 1derrymaine vcard Greece
11 Jan 2014 - 6:07 PM

please do! Tongue

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8529 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jan 2014 - 10:11 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like this a lot, strong lines plus action; but that far shore needs to be horizontal. With the man being placed so near to the edge of the frame, rotation and the resultant crop would destroy the picture - so I would be inclined to skew the top right corner up a notch to get the line level.

Then crop a thin sliver off the bottom of the frame to have the diagonal hit the actual corner, and finally crop off the top to leave a square.

Well it works for me... More concentrated, contained, more about the lines and the figure. Less about empty space above him.
Moira

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