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davey_griffo (e2 Member)

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16 Sep 2012 - 10:42 AM

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Excellent image.

This is just the sort of observational street photography a friend (Mrswoolybill) does so well too.

I love this kind of "taking a peek into other people's lives" shot. Not too intrusive, but tells a story.

NDODS (e2 Member)

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16 Sep 2012 - 2:00 PM

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A really great candid, which instantly appeals, such an image will certainly lend itself to many possible post narratives, which I must say I find a rather endearing feature in a good photograph.

Regards Nathan

Focus_Man

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17 Sep 2012 - 10:07 AM

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A good candid Paul, but given your own suggestion I have tried the crop and think it is worthy of consideration. I also straightened it up a little bit to make the window and door transoms and mullions look square. I also got rid of the pillar without affecting the resultant composition, a little stretching.

Frank

paulbroad

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19 Sep 2012 - 7:51 AM

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It's not leaning if you look at the verticals. It was shot at an angle rather than straight on so the horizontals have a slight fall.

Paul

xwang (e2 Member)

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20 Sep 2012 - 5:09 PM

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Hello Paul,
I read above that you talked about the vertical and horizontal..I don't think that straight horizontal and vertical is very appealing, see MOD2. Personally I would take MOD3 one.. I would like to keep the picture on the glass, it tells me this is a hair dresser's room. I'm not quite sure about the "big sale" sign. It could be a indication to show that she is having a "big sale", because she was looking for the customers; or it has nothing to do with the hairdresser, a sign for other shop. I cloned it off for you to have a look the version without it. And a little burn job has been done...
Jas.